Unfriended
One night there was 6 friends video chatting on Skype. Those six friends were Blaire, Adam, Mitch, Jess, Ken. While they were chatting some user named Billie227 entered the group chat. At first, these 6 friends thought it was just a Prank but then... Blaire was got a message notification on Facebook from her classmate Laura Barns that committed suicide exactly a year ago because of a video that went viral of her getting drunk and pooping on herself. Blaire asked everyone to raise there hands up so she can see if any of her friends were pranking her, but no one pranked her. She thought someone just hacked Laura's account but then crazy things started happening on the chat. Each and every friend was attacked.
All of the friends thought that a enemy named Val was the hacker because the was always being mean to them, so they invited her into the chat. They were chatting for a while and then Jess's Facebook page started blowing up with all of Val's pictures of her being drunk and high. But Jess wasn't posting them. Val started cussing her out and then told her to delete them all, then she left the group. They called the police to report the anonymous chatter. At that time Blaire recieved Val's Instagram which leaded her to Laura's video. Out of no where Val rejoined the group and she was sitting still in a room with a open bottle of bleach as if the computer was frozen. Then, her laptop falls and they hear the police arrive at Val's house and the friends overheard the police saying thaat Val committed suicide.
Adam gets the account of the anonymous user! but then his chat shuts down minutes later it reopens with him looking for something while a hidden camera was watching him. He went in the kitchen and some unknown force starts blending his arm, and slicing his throut with blades.
Billie227 (Laura) forces them all to play never have I ever after 2 of them were uliminated. If you lose the game you must die. Laura starts saying some of their darkest secrets, starting with Jess. She asked Jess if she started rumors about Blaire having an eating disorder. Then so on, Laura keeps asking all of them about the secrets and they all rotted each other out. Adam and Blaire receive papers from Laura. Blaire's said "if you reveal this note Adam will die." Mitch forced them to show the notes. Adam emediatly shot himself while showing the note he recived. His note said "if you reveal this note Blaire dies." But she didn't.
Laura wanted to know who didn't go to her grave. Blaire forced Jess not to answer so Laura did stuff. Laura turned off all the lights in Jess's house and Jess got scared and ran to her bathroom crying. Jess somehow disconnects from the chat then reconnects, showing a hot flat iron shoved down her throat.
The last two standing were Mitch and Blaire. Mitch and Blaire have been a couple for a while. They were also the last ones to play never have I ever. Laura continues to do her evil ways and asks Blaire something so bad about Mitch and Blaires relationship something so bad that Mitch had to reveal something too. What Mitch revealed made him die.
Blaire was the last one standing... Laura knew this whole time that Blaire was the one who uploaded the video when she was drunk. Laura also knew that Blaire didn't go to her grave and was lying about everything this whole time. Laura was just torturing all 6 friends because of what they did to her. Laura now started counting down with a timer on Blaires computer while playing slow and torturing music. She had 30 seconds to admit she did everything. At the last like 2 seconds she admited everything that she did, but of course Laura did not care at all. After the timer ran out everything was scilent and out of no where she heard the door creaking open. Then "Boom!" The everythings black and everyone is dead.
Tuesday, October 13, 2015
Wednesday, October 7, 2015
Response to Charecterization
After reading La Guera, Payasa, and Marin i noticed they have some things in common. Like their actions. All three of their actions are bad actions. All three of them also have common reactions in the story. Last but not least they also have their appearence which is what they have in common the most.
La Guera's actions are stealing minor items to bring her rainbows and Baba Sheep in the inside but on the outside she tries to act all tough on the outside. Like in the text when it says "I'm white on the outside but brown on the inside." from the donut she saw in the shop. Payasa's actions are taking drugs to get things off her mind. But when Payasa takes drugs or does drugs she has bad actions for example she takes dares by her friends. Payasa flashed her nipples and took off her pants and underwear in front of the whole park. For Marin her actions are basically being a prostitute. At night she sings and dances under the street lights for "work." Their appearances my in common too. La Guera's apperence is pink cheeks, white skin, and way too much make up, and her culture is White and Mexican. Payasa's appearanceis teased hair, short tight skirts, racoon style make up, and shes also Boisterous. Marin also wears short skirts, she has green eyes and shes also from Puerto Rico. Their actions are all based on their reactions. Which is their neighborhood and surroundings.I cant forget to include their feelings they all act like this beacuse they either dont have parents involved in their lifes or someone they loved left them.
But i do not think La Guera, Payasa, and Marin are archetypes. I dont think their archetypes because they have nothing that fits into just one catagorie. They're all their indivisual person. For example La Guera is a want to be Chola with all her make up and attitude. Payasa is a Drug addict with her drugs and flashing body parts. Marin is a prostitute with her short skirts and her dancing under street lights. All three main charecters may have something in common but their still not archetypes.
To all three of these stories there really isn't a happy ending. At the end something bad happens to them or they continue to do what they do. La Guera gets all her make up, gum, candies and etc. stolen for her enemy but that still does not bring her back to rainbows and Baba Sheep. In Payasa her brothers that were cholos would beat her to make her tought and slit her tounge with a razor everytime she lost a fight. So she has been in the hospital for cutting herself through all the pain shes been through. Then Marin continues tho be a prostitute beacuse her boyfriend she was going to have a future with left her. And the only reason he left her is because of the way she acted. These are all the reasons why these three girls have something in common but not everything, and being their own person with no Archetypes.
La Guera's actions are stealing minor items to bring her rainbows and Baba Sheep in the inside but on the outside she tries to act all tough on the outside. Like in the text when it says "I'm white on the outside but brown on the inside." from the donut she saw in the shop. Payasa's actions are taking drugs to get things off her mind. But when Payasa takes drugs or does drugs she has bad actions for example she takes dares by her friends. Payasa flashed her nipples and took off her pants and underwear in front of the whole park. For Marin her actions are basically being a prostitute. At night she sings and dances under the street lights for "work." Their appearances my in common too. La Guera's apperence is pink cheeks, white skin, and way too much make up, and her culture is White and Mexican. Payasa's appearanceis teased hair, short tight skirts, racoon style make up, and shes also Boisterous. Marin also wears short skirts, she has green eyes and shes also from Puerto Rico. Their actions are all based on their reactions. Which is their neighborhood and surroundings.I cant forget to include their feelings they all act like this beacuse they either dont have parents involved in their lifes or someone they loved left them.
But i do not think La Guera, Payasa, and Marin are archetypes. I dont think their archetypes because they have nothing that fits into just one catagorie. They're all their indivisual person. For example La Guera is a want to be Chola with all her make up and attitude. Payasa is a Drug addict with her drugs and flashing body parts. Marin is a prostitute with her short skirts and her dancing under street lights. All three main charecters may have something in common but their still not archetypes.
To all three of these stories there really isn't a happy ending. At the end something bad happens to them or they continue to do what they do. La Guera gets all her make up, gum, candies and etc. stolen for her enemy but that still does not bring her back to rainbows and Baba Sheep. In Payasa her brothers that were cholos would beat her to make her tought and slit her tounge with a razor everytime she lost a fight. So she has been in the hospital for cutting herself through all the pain shes been through. Then Marin continues tho be a prostitute beacuse her boyfriend she was going to have a future with left her. And the only reason he left her is because of the way she acted. These are all the reasons why these three girls have something in common but not everything, and being their own person with no Archetypes.
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